You included so many details in your writing! Way to go! Just remember that you may only use 1 “and” in a sentence. The next time you go to write “and” use a period instead, and begin a new sentence.
What is your favourite part of your New Year’s celebration?
Mrs. Cassell 🙂
ms casll my fafit thing abat my widing wus the gams your frend ginger.
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